Revisions:

[erikestabrook]

Senryu #1

quiet morning in
my window peering for the
sites and sounds of life

Senryu #2

spiritual calling
whether Zen, karma, Jesus,
it is known as God

Senryu #3

many accolades
have been said about the man
who gives but has none

Senryu #4

wave goodbye to me
you will be in my heart for
years that pass by me

Senryu #5

bright sun beams hit house
a new beginning for the
Katrina victim

Senryu #6

apple trees like a
rosy button nose grows for
the ones who have taste

Senryu #7

steamy forest pines
cut from the healthy ground
a life extinguises

Senryu #8

generic houses
packed with general names
this is where I live

Senryu #9

by the river bed
was a house with furnishings
empty house instead

Senryu #10

alive with a rattle
I fell out of the upstairs,
bunk bed, hit my head.

[Mysty]

Hiya Erik... excellent start... only thing is I think #7 ...... which is my favorite btw..... I think that one might qualify as a Haiku. Anyways hon I truly enjoyed

Mysty

[solo]

these are a pleasure to read as i said....i see how you use this format very well...