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Angel's Web of Pain

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Old 05-08-2007, 11:24 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A sleepless angel hooked inside
of a web glowing stars from her
hands, hanging on a mother's birth
dreaming dead awake counting
screams to the air.
The heart spoke of anguished
whistled wings tired and broken
false witnesses regained in the name
of love.

Challenging four square broken
pieces of art degrading the light
of the moon's pavement sunlight.
Deforming earth black lit hair-flow
of changing weather flickering
feathers of white soft windy tears.

Profound movements
of angels flying
under rain and false
worshiped Gods.
Naked Art for the devil,
painting the angel's hair
nude with a slight touch
of anger.

Disguised leaves on
Autumn's ground hides
an angel's broken body.
The webs are silent
to her fall.
Jesus listening
to the halo's light
forming gratification.
Earthbound soil
to dust, the birth of
a child.
To death, angel's
shifting light
reflects a soul.
Your left foot connects to your right foot.
Your soul connects to the heart.
Your eyes connects to the brain and you see....
The beauty of life standing still on a box of nails digging for rainbows we all want the pain because life is vain but happiness believes in itself.
 

Old 05-08-2007, 07:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Dear Misty ,

This was a very intense write. The images you have painted flashed in my mind like a movie. I would love to know your inspiration for this piece? The metaphors of dark, light, good angels, false angels, birth, and death were memorizing, and enchanting. There is so much emotion pouring from this piece, and the message was quite beautiful. when I get your response, I will come back and read again. I want to be in sync with your thoughts clearly.

{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}


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