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"He is Changing My World."

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Old 09-21-2007, 09:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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"He is Changing My World." (Poem). Author: Stardust. (9-19-2007).

He uplifted me when I was down
Bringing smiles into my blues.
He plants trees of hope upon the ground,
And sends His Angels singing the clues.

The Healer is changing my World
Around the borders of my heart.
No more tears and fears will be clustered.
The sound of cheerful friends will never part.

Bounties, gleams of hope, the kiss of Mother Nature,
The sun peeps from under the clouds,
The ocean waves roar wildly by the shore,
My eyes peer life in motion, while I am Heavenīs bound.

God is indeed, changing my World.
No more fears and tears will be carried away.
My boundless faith touches the roads I walk,
Bringing hope and trust to a brand-new day.

Author: Stardust. (9-19-2007).
Authorīs Notes: I am glad that I could write another poem. However, Inspirations do not come too often on my mind. I apologize, if I do not post a poem. If I donīt, it means that I havenīt got any new poem written. Anyway, I may reply to other poetīs posts, and offer my kind comments. I am so sorry that, I do not have many new poems to post. I let you know that, I am NOT A PROFESSIONAL WRITER. I do it as a HOBBY. That is all...
Thank you all in advance, for reading my little work!! Bye for now.
Fondly, Starry.
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Old 09-21-2007, 09:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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very nice Starry,
nature is God's gift afterall,
 

Old 09-21-2007, 09:56 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Good Morning, Erik!! Welcome to a brand-new day that God has given to us!! Rejoice!!
Thank you, Erik for reading my poem and writing your comments!! I could see that you are by the Computer. You caught my post really soon. I have just posted it.
Thank you so much for all you do!! God bless!!
Cheers, Starry.
 

Old 09-21-2007, 04:25 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hi Starry...even though you may not post every day, you are keeping company with many of us in that regard, so don't feel that you have to apologize. LOL! And whatever you pose is well worth it's weight in gold...thanks for another calming and very cleverly and smoothly written homage to Our Father.

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Old 09-21-2007, 10:05 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Hi, Nomad!! I am very pleased to see you here reviewing my little work!! Thank you for stopping by and offering your wise appraisals!! I donīt think that I deserve so much praise. I just do the best that I can. I hope, it is good enough. As I have already mentioned, INSPIRATIONS DO NOT COME TOO OFTEN ON MY MIND. I am getting DRY UP. Anyway, I might show up to offer my comments on other poetīs posts. Itīll be nice, and Iīll show that I still care to stay. I love this site!! It is a lovely and friendly Community that gathers so many talented Writers and Poets. I am honoured to be part of this team. Thank you again, dear Nomad for reading my poem!! God bless you, sweetheart!!
Cheers, Starry. (Itīs mine coming up soon...)
 

Old 09-26-2007, 09:01 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Stardust...wonderfully done! I love the images and truths projected in this work. Indeed, our world begins its change within us and changes how we see it and live in it and think about it once we realize just who created it for us. A change of eyesight...subtle recognition of things we did not recognize before...a different way of 'seeing'...yes, this is a beautiful work!
 

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OOOOHHHH!! MY DEAREST FRIEND, BENNY!!
HOW COULD I SHOW YOU MY HEARTFELT APPRECIATIONS FOR YOUR OUTSTANDING REVIEWS OVER MY POEM, SWEET BENNY!! YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER, AND I AM CERTAINLY HONOURED BY YOUR PRESENCE. I AM READY TO PUBLISH MY FIRST BOOK OF POEMS. IīLL CALL IT: "BROOKS. MEDITATIONS and POEMS." WOULD YOU BE ABLE TO TELL ME, IF YOU KNOW A GOOD AMERICAN PUBLISHER WHO MAY BE INTERESTED IN MY CHRISTIAN POETRY, SWEETIE?? I HAVE POSTED ALL MY POEMS AT JPiC FORUM FOR WRITERS. SO, IT WONīT BE DIFFICULT TO FIND THEM ALL IN HERE: "MY POEMS."
DEAR BENNY: COULD YOU GUIDE ME ABOUT THAT, DEAR?? ALL THIS IS COMPLETELY NEW TO ME, SINCE THIS IS THE FIRST TIME THAT I WRITE A BOOK OF POEMS. ANYWAY, I AM READY TO PUBLISH MY FIRST BOOK OF POEMS, IF A GOOD PUBLISHER IS INTERESTED IN MY WORK. ALL MY POEMS ARE IN HERE FOR EVERYONE TO READ, IF THEY WANT TO. YOU MAY SEND ME A P.M. (personal message with further details, if you wish to help me about this). I KNOW, YOU HAVE ALREADY PUBLISHED BOOKS, SO THAT YOU HAVE EXPERIENCE.
CONGRATULATIONS, DEAR BENNY, IN ALL YOUR ACHIEVEMENTS!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR STOPPING BY MY POEM, AND OFFERING YOUR KIND COMMENTS AND WISE APPRAISALS!! GOD BLESS YOU and THOSE YOU LOVE ALWAYS, and IN ALL YOU DO!!
Warm Regards, Starry.
 

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Your words has made me happy. How wonderful God is.
Thank you for your kind heart. Misty
 

Old 10-22-2007, 09:36 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Thank you, Misty for taking your special time in reading my little work and offering your kind comments!! Iīll always appreciate your reviews. Sincerely, Starry.
 

Old 10-23-2007, 06:46 PM   #10 (permalink)
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The Healer is changing my World
Around the borders of my heart.
No more tears and fears will be clustered.
The sound of cheerful friends will never part.




I identify most profoundly with this stanza ... thank you for sharing
 


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