Spiritual Poems:

[stardust]

Poem: "I hope so!!". by Monica Bertrand. (Stardust). (9-11-2006).

I hope so!!
No foes will shatter my dreams
That God has planted deep in my feelings,
In my inner soul.
I hope so!!
No foes with their own greed
Will kill all the living beings.
If I should struggle and fight,
It´s my noble mission from above.
I hope so!!
No evil on this Earth
Will vanish our own birth.
For what all God´s creatures
Will remain here to stay.
I hope so!!
No more damage will occur
If our hearts are uplifted.
Look up at the sky and see,
What God wants you to be.
No sooner I was coming
Out of the light,
Than I saw the miracles happen.
The moon was so bright,
All was calm, no need to be hasten.

Author: Monica Bertrand. (Stardust).
Written on 9-11-2006. This is my little poem for all of you to read. Hugs, from Monica. (Stardust).

[TrueBlue]

Nice poem. I especially liked the part about "Look up at the sky and see,
What God wants you to be." Kind of poignant about how extremely the message of Love, of God's, is misappropriated.

[stardust]

Hello TrueBlue!! Thank you for your comments about my little poem!! What do you mean about ...misappropriated?? Could you explain to me a bit more, about the meaning of that word?? I meant, God wants us to be somebody good. That is all I meant in my little poem. I love your Poem: "STARDUST." It is a real Masterpiece and a work of art. I love it!! I think, you are a great young poet. Keep your poems flow!!...See you later TrueBlue. Sincerely, Stardust.

[TrueBlue]

I meant with the fundamentalist terrorist. They call it a holy war. But it only seems bloody for me. There is a lot of change going on. But it's just crazy and insanely sad when somebody feels they have to strap on a bomb and kill themselves and strangers. I don't hate the people. I hate the war.

[erikestabrook]

I must say I hope so part doesn't seem lik eit fits in this or any poem,
soem parts were very good, but then it went back into I hope so and I wish it weren't their just letting you know so you can improve

[stardust]

Hello TrueBlue and other replies: Thank You for your comments about my little poem!! You see, I am not a Professional Writer or Poet. I do it as a Hobby, and I love it!! I love reading and writing. Although, I don´t have any Methodology to write. It just comes out from my heart of hearts. The Poem "I hope so!!" was written for the September 11th, tragic event on the World Trade Center, Twin Towers Terrorist Attacks, in New York City. I hate wars and crazy people, who start doing evil things, which only lead to a mad world. I always try to improve myself. It is hard to write well, though. I try my best. However, if my best is not good enough, I shall leave and go elsewhere...Bye and Good Luck!! Stardust.

[erikestabrook]

no one want syou too leave I was just saying that, after all trueblue like dyour poem, and maybe others will too justs because i have a negativ eopinion shouldn't let it affect you that much

[stardust]

Hello!! You see, I am a Sensitive Lady!! I shall keep trying my best. I´ll Post some more in the near future. They will be just little Poems, but nothing too special. I am not William Shakespeare, and I will never be anything closer to that. I think, people in today´s world, are too far behind from being Shakespeare. Good Luck!! Stardust.

[erikestabrook]

I have a name and I'm pretty sensitive myself, theirs great poets in this world, but hard to be as revolutionary as Shakepeare as I've read allot of his works, glad your sticking around I'll watch what I say to ya

[stardust]

O.K. Erike!! Is it your name Erike??... How may I call you??...May I call you Erike??...I have a name too. My name is Monica. You may call me Stardust in here. I posted some more Poems. I hope, you like them.Bye for now, Stardust.