12-24-2007, 09:58 PM
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The best poetry is poetry not calculated...just let the ink spill. This is an anthem of many in my opinion, and yes some have walked the line with crooked shoes, and some may stop to repair their wings, and sometimes life just does not cooperate at all, even when we have done everything we think is right, honest, honorable, and etc. However or whatever the reasons, he is and always be there. I loved the ending as it did not get so so down that his presence is not acknowledged or the fact that again, he is and will always be there. Great to see you writing Zaac. Your poems speak from the heart, and that needs no correcting. I loved the metaphors and the depth of the poem. I loved this very much. I would like to do this in Calligraphy on parchment.
Can't wait for you to attach a title to it.
PD
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Last edited by PaintedDiary; 12-24-2007 at 10:16 PM.
Reason: additional commentary
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