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Old 12-23-2007, 11:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Don’t wanna fade into the window
But I don’t like living in this place
No room to move, no room to grow
No room for saving grace.

Don’t wanna run into the rainbow
Without colors of my own
I’ve lived behind the sky so long
And grey is all I know.

Can’t you weave a smile for me
From the ribbons in my dreams
Where my eyes would always open
With you looking back at me.

Sometimes I seem to walk the plank
Into a cackling raging sea.
Sometimes it’s true but others
I know it’s best to leave things be.

I’ve always felt like pottery
With a crack coming out the kiln
Not even fit for making clay
No way to start again

But within in the wanderings, the haunting mists
That cloud my mind with ease
I have planted my soul
In the Solid Rock
And I am called His child.

For in His hands tho’ I lie lifeless
With tears streaming from His eyes
He gently lifts me in His Arms
singing as He heals.

There's never any mention
of the things I've done and said
that made Him look any less
than the truth He says He is.

To describe His Presence takes more time
And words there are to use.
But rest assured, I know it now
And my wanderings are through.
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Old 12-23-2007, 12:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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this is kind of disjointed now that i read it. just some stuff came spilling out. have to empty my head every once in awhile not sure i even like it.

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Old 12-24-2007, 09:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The best poetry is poetry not calculated...just let the ink spill. This is an anthem of many in my opinion, and yes some have walked the line with crooked shoes, and some may stop to repair their wings, and sometimes life just does not cooperate at all, even when we have done everything we think is right, honest, honorable, and etc. However or whatever the reasons, he is and always be there. I loved the ending as it did not get so so down that his presence is not acknowledged or the fact that again, he is and will always be there. Great to see you writing Zaac. Your poems speak from the heart, and that needs no correcting. I loved the metaphors and the depth of the poem. I loved this very much. I would like to do this in Calligraphy on parchment.

Can't wait for you to attach a title to it.

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Old 12-25-2007, 07:01 AM   #4 (permalink)
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feel free to calligraphy it...lol
 

Old 12-29-2007, 12:28 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Zaac:
If you feel down, the Lord will lift up your spirit, as you pray and ask Him to help you. You would have to trust the Lord with all your heart, and He will make miracles on you that you have never expected. Your poetry is amazing. I truly like your poem, although it is a bit sad. Donīt feel down, Zaac!! Begin to pray and talk to the Lord, and you will experiment a great transformation within yourself. You will never feel alone again...The Lord will be with you, and wipe your tears away. You may feel His presence next to you and even feel His Heavenly touch. It truly happened to me, and I began to realize about my own transformation in the woman that I am today. I was a much different woman before. It is a matter of true beliefs, if you want to. It is absolutely FREE, nothing to lose, but lots to win in priceless rewards. May God fill your heart with peace, many blessings, health and unconditional love that only Him and Him alone can give!!
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