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Old 07-12-2007, 08:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hybrid Rainbow

An Intrinsic medley of vibrant distinct color,
A taste as prismatic as your soft palm’s touch
Its pigments smell like sunshine beneath the birch

A gentle paint brush running ‘cross the sky
Serenading articulately, a song without a pitch
I hear its color like I hear your voice, absently

Hybrid Rainbow, Blow me a kiss?
Cannot you share you secrets with your song?
Hybrid Rainbow, Bring me this?
Unfold your lies upon my mind.

Robotic color, Black and White
Too cold and hard to touch
A gentle grope holds no enjoyment

A jumbled blend of mine and yours,
A pretty pictured palette,
Painting pictures on your tongue

Hybrid Rainbow, Let me touch you?
Caress your soft edged curve
Hybrid Rainbow, Let me listen
And let me hear the melody of which I may not Deserve


A doodle i drew and i poem from a school assignment. :3
 

Old 07-13-2007, 09:07 AM   #2 (permalink)
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ooh - Victoria,
Very cool.

"A gentle paint brush running ‘cross the sky
serenading articulately, a song without a pitch.
I hear its color like I hear your voice, absently."

I like this. It's sparkly like the stars in the hand of your little drawing.

Jolie

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Old 07-15-2007, 07:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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wonderful imagery...enjoyed this one tremendously...definitely have a blossoming beauty here...loved it.
 


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