Spoken Word & Freestyle:

[Wind]

I Can’t Forget You


No matter how hard I try your right there with the smile that
could kill any person with only a simply glance.I wanted to say
sorry yet the words never quite came when I saw you more
like I wanted to hide my guilt with sad jokes and games the
more I struggled the more you tried to come close yet I decided
to depart so I could know your beautiful face would stay until I
started crying over the mistake I had made and wanted you back
in my life. Though I have no regrets I do reflect on everything and
wonder what I could have done to change it don’t let me go yet I
will struggle cause it hurts to feel this feelings that I have I want
to crush them for them seem unnatural though they come so sweetly.
I can’t forget you so don’t forget me so that we may meet again
and see each other with that feeling in heart.

[butchiesmom]

Gotta go to bed but will be replying tomorrow!
Gail

[butchiesmom]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Wind

I Can’t Forget You

No matter how hard I try your right there with the smile that
could kill any person with only a simply glance.I wanted to say
sorry yet the words never quite came when I saw you more
like I wanted to hide my guilt with sad jokes and games the
more I struggled the more you tried to come close yet I decided
to depart so I could know your beautiful face would stay until I
started crying over the mistake I had made and wanted you back
in my life. Though I have no regrets I do reflect on everything and
wonder what I could have done to change it don’t let me go yet I
will struggle cause it hurts to feel this feelings that I have I want
to crush them for them seem unnatural though they come so sweetly.
I can’t forget you so don’t forget me so that we may meet again
and see each other with that feeling in heart.

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Wind

No matter how hard I try, you're right there with a smile that could kill a person with a single glance.

I wanted to say I'm sorry yet the words never quite came when I saw you; more like I wanted to hide my guilt with sad jokes and games. The more I struggled, the more you tried to come close. Yet I decided to depart so I could know your beautiful face would stay until I started crying over the mistake I had made and wanted you back in my life.

Though I have no regrets, I do reflect on everything and wonder what I could have done to change them. Don’t let me go yet I will struggle because it hurts to feel these feelings that I have. I want to crush them for they seem unnatural yet they come so sweetly.

I can’t forget you so pleasedon’t forget me for we may meet again and see each other with that feeling in our hearts.

Such an emotional write! Was this a romance broken by mistakes or by death? You're reflectly on what might been given the opportunity for change. Would you let me know if I've interpreted this correctly?

Because it was harder to read the way you posted it I've suggested a few formating changes, corrected spelling mistakes and some punctuation without (I hope) changing the passion radiating from your work. Please disregard any suggestions I've made if you don't agree. I probably missed a few punctuation places (not my forte...) I'm sure there's other people who can help.

Good write Wind!
Gail

[Wind]

i thank you so very much

[MsJacquiiC]

Thanks for posting the spelling/grammar corrections Gail! And I hope you take note Wind
I've just read this poem and the first thought that came to mind is ==> WHOA! Such an incredible, emotional insight into the romantic realm for such a young person. Reminds me of someone I love; he was likely too young for me, yet so wise and learned beyond his years.

Anyway - thanks for the share.

J.

[Wind]

thank you i'm still gettign used to it but thank you