Spoken Word & Freestyle:

[Mysty]

Hi Nomad.......Your poem spoke to me in a different way..... as if I the reader was the wind dancing with the dancer. Leading the steps. It is pure poetic symmetry the dancer and the wind. MsJ is soooooo right in that this is pure genius. I Love the whole of the poem but love also the

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by butchiesmom

When temptation strikes
Interlocking mists of clouds
Feel her soft slinkiness sliding
Along their shapes
As she rearranges her
Easel … arms flowing fiercely
Through trees and waves
Blindfolding the sun
Calling to the rain to bathe her
Thunder …sing to her!

I especially love this part. Beautiful...... Thank you for a excellent read and new favorite.


Mysty

[nomadicrhymer]

... a little bit late... but thanks for the great review, Mysty

Nomad

[tham]

Wow,I felt the wind, if you ever seen the series, planet earth, they tell how winds start at the poles.
When I read this, I could see the beginning, gathering itself, progressing onward, moving with a direction of its own. How wonderful to see it move in words. I think I am out of my league here. Very nice though, thank you much.

[nomadicrhymer]

Tham, you definitely aren't out of your league. Appreciation is in the ear of the reader. Thanks so much for your feedback

Nomad

[MsJacquiiC]

... and in all honesty - this piece should have been gracing the JPiC Portal for months now PMing you momentarily...

J.

[MsJacquiiC]

Feature Stamped!
Now showcased on the JPiC Portal as well as in the showcase.
Thanks so much again for the wonderful share

J.