My First new Clarity Pyramid Post

Jer4clarity · 06-09-2007, 12:52 AM

SPRING

Refresh
Born again

The horizon sings
sweet morning harmonies
to serenade the sun’s rise.

“the Aroma of earth and rain”

©Jerry P. Quinn

Altree94 · 06-09-2007, 12:58 AM

Beautiful!
Inventor and MASTER of the form, I see!
TY for posting, Jer!
- Tree.

erikestabrook · 06-09-2007, 01:00 AM

this seems like haiku taken to another level,

I enjoyed the poem the ending and really realized
it was a remarkable yet down to earth piece,

it had all the elements that I like and proves your a thinker as well

Jer4clarity · 06-09-2007, 01:07 AM

thanks for all your kind comments Tree and Eric

PaintedDiary · 06-09-2007, 02:44 AM

Dear Mr. Quinn,

What an honor it is to have you here with us fist of all! Secondly, this poem was brilliant, exquisite, and it is quite evident why you are the master. The poem is just wow, and I could picture the horizon and smell the aroma; yes, you placed me there. Fantabulous!!!!!!!!! Welcome again to the community.

Kimberly

MsJacquiiC · 06-09-2007, 06:43 AM

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by erikestabrook

this seems like haiku taken to another level,

I agree - that's why I like this form so very much.
Such small amount of words = such succinct clarity!

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Jer4clarity

SPRING

Refresh
Born again

The horizon sings
sweet morning harmonies
to serenade the sun’s rise.

“the Aroma of earth and rain”

©Jerry P. Quinn

I loved this poem - Brings fond memories of honeysuckle in Tennessee Spring.
Oh - and the scent right before a fresh rain - ah! Beautiful Clarity Pyramid JER

Thanx for the share

Jacquii.

ladylyric · 06-20-2007, 07:00 PM

First time reading you poet but I dig your style....clarity...visuals...this was a scent teaser..as I read I created the scene in my mind....then i said it again to myself with my eyes closed....BEautiful...Spring = Rebirth ...this style of writing here is like the resurrection of a piece of something in my poetic mind....seriously..the creativity alone has inspired me.
Perfect choice of words....perfect topic for such brevity

Checkmate · 06-26-2007, 02:43 PM

cool post...was telling kit carson i need to try this form out...i think i will enjoy it...nice to meet the inventor...thanks for sharing.

Sally Roberts · 06-26-2007, 03:26 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!! Jer:

This is your first try at a Clarity Pyramid?

It looks like you have been using this style for YEARS!!
A proficient wordsmith!!

I thought it was superb!!
Blessings

Bear · 06-26-2007, 05:44 PM

beautiful jerry simply elegant
handshakes
Bear