Spoken Word & Freestyle:

[MsJacquiiC]

In Secret Circles (abstract improv)

Transcendent am I...
Purplesque and fair and pretty,
stomping over all Mother's
descendent properties.

Trumping & romping, collecting
pieces from Father's notorious whore.
That horror is infamously & anally notated;
an angel-soft tissue for your ass
if you will... Dirty, dingy, soiled...
Cheap and mistreated.

Royalty dare naught know me
right now.

Thick as a whole gaggle of alabastered
thieves (fair-scented and pretty of course)
I romp. Stomp Pomp & Circumstance!
This whole cap-n-gown
notorious Community's made
and sustained by me. Just
me and my invisible lonesome. Only.
How dare you?

I am God. Second to none! I shall
redeem not your filthy
cunniving empty-sore of a soul,
for you Mistress have
misused my lover poetry.

Blessed be.
Eternity as the gossip already uttered
in secret circles.


Copyright © 2006 Jacquii Cooke

[MEDIA]http://jpicforum.info/pics/insecretcircles.mp3[/MEDIA]

[Harry]

excellent job, love it

[MsJacquiiC]

Thanx HARRY - it is more than a bit abstract
I also added a voice recording to make it more "understood"
I soooo hate my voice lol

Jacquii.

[PaintedDiary]

Hey Ms Jacquii------->That was hot!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your voice is fine. Please continue to do voice recordings!!!!! Goes well with the Spoken Word / Freestyle section as well. As, I have put in the Chatbox, you have weaved a brand new web in this piece. Listening to the poem I gather a sense of evolution if you will. Sadness, learning period, changes, evolution, a birth, then re-birth so to speak, then triumph. LOL, I have no idea where ALL that came from, but was my first instinct. Absolutely Fantabulous, scrumpcilicious, and you never cease to amaze me. What a great surprise to wake up to. You go girl!!!!!!!

~*Painted*~

[MsJacquiiC]

tehehehe - kinda spooky hearing my voice replayed like that...
I'm like OUCH! LOL - but anyway thanx for the

Jacquii.

[Benny]

Wow...lots of thought here in your words and now my own mind...what a wonderful work! Lots to consider here...a whole lot to think about and peal. I love this, MsJ...take a bow!

[MsJacquiiC]

Thanx for your comment BENNY - glad to not have scared you off

Jacquii.