Sun Rise

Jeez · 02:33 AM

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erikestabrook · 09-02-2006, 05:24 PM

what a poem? really this poem was great, it hada bit of sophistication, and it was very inviting and warm

michael · 09-03-2006, 11:33 AM

Hello Jeez

This seemed like a great haiku style poem. I enjoyed it. I thought about the sunshine, warm weather and summertime after reading this. Good reading about your Sun Rise.

michael

sagesweetwater · 09-19-2006, 04:55 AM

Hi Jeez,

Great poem, in it, alot of warmth and a feeling of nature's rays penetrating our souls with brightness and an inner voice to write this poem that you have. I appreciate simple poems like this. It says so much in few words.

Sage

Jeez · 02:34 AM

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Jeez · 02:36 AM

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Jeez · 02:38 AM

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MsJacquiiC · 10-02-2006, 09:35 PM

WHOA JEEZ - I was expecting something really spectacularly worded and long-read, but you've surprised with a bit of finesse... This short piece is the epitome of questioning the intent of the Maker - if you will.

I've heard questions: "If there is a God - why is there such turmoil amongst "His" People?"

I believe you've answered that question - And you've answered it with an astounding UMPH!

Enjoyed this one thoroughly - Seems you didn't waste a word!
Thanx for sharing

Jacquii.

Jeez · 02:39 AM

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Altree94 · 10-15-2006, 11:14 PM

Hi Jeez!
I like this very aptly worded riddle you have posed here. There really does seem to be a wistfulness about the days end. Can't quite agree with the answer though, since I am in no way a morning person! LOL! My eyes don't start to sparkle until sometime in the afternoon!
Nice write! Keep posting!