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Old 04-23-2008, 10:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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inside, a herd of tiny buffalo stampede me towards my next moments
occasionally, they pause to graze on memories I’m done with and information I just never used
and then they grow restless again
snorting and butting heads, kicking the ground and grunting
and in tandem they all start off again
some days I wish I could tame them, corral them into a fence and brand them
but in doing so, I might stop being me

3.15.2008


As a point of reference, I wrote this about ADD. It could certainly be applicable to many other situations as well though. I went ahead and capitalized the "I's" for those who would prefer it, but originally, they were not.
 

Old 04-24-2008, 08:43 AM   #2 (permalink)
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This is expressed so well and I can relate.
Yes it can be about many different disorders.
Great metaphor, great write!


Nightlife calls me.
Through her I am free.
It's the only way to be,
all caught up in a mystery!
Born with full moon fever,
I can make you a believer!
For I am the moonchild,
truly born to be wild!
 


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