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Old 03-07-2008, 02:09 PM
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Evolve
The echoes sound
Through the ages of man
New age dawns as the world is one
Slowly the forming of
Global mankind
Revolves
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Old 03-07-2008, 06:06 PM
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Dear Kit,

The loop of this and bringing it back around is genius! Evolve to revolve...just wow! I love the brevity, message, quite profound in such few lines, and it is memorable. The content, structure, and execution are flawless as usual from you. Like a postcard to the world for the world. Kit, you are an extraordinary poet my friend and you keep taking us to higher and higher poetic galaxies. Write on! Loved it! Oh yes...definitely should be on a card! Excellent rating and going in my favorites! Thank you for sharing.

ps.-----> You seem to pick the most perfectly fitting titles as well....Bravo Kit!

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Hey MIKE - I think this is a WONDERFUL piece of poetry and will make a lovely greeting card for the GGO website! The form is really lovely and an earthy write that shows so much love for Mother Earth.

My favorite lines - The last three:

Slowly the forming of
Global mankind
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Insinuates a humanity surrounded in real peace and a true love for each other.
A very nice write indeed! Question: Do you have any ideas about the e-Card graphic?

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I favorited a few, I will go back in and take a closer look and get back to you...but a nice sunrise sounds like the ticket.



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~Sunrise In Pike's Peak~ looks like a winner to me.



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Wonderful MIKE! Thanx so much for submitting! I've added your card to the GreetingsGalleryOnline.com Poetic Showcase: GreetingsGalleryOnline.com - I'm sure many will enjoy it!


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