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Old 04-12-2008, 05:51 PM
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The Depth of My Soul
Depths Of My Soul

Grasping my hand we stroll down the garden path as one
Let everyone see the depths of our hearts love
Deep within her soul lives the sun, the breeze, the moonlight
She is my inner peace, I always need her by my side
She is my life, my love, my everything
Her love has set me free and I’ve been warmed by her fiery blaze
I love her from the depths of my soul
Making my heart soul and mind complete
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Every poem of yours is like a new trip to the candy store! I love this as well. It makes me warm and as if I am watching two love birds and just smiling at them. A few places I believe may need commas I think. You have an hourglass of undying pure love in the sands. Beautiful Bear, just beautiful!

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thank you so very much Pianted for taking time reading and commenting on my poem
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