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Old 07-15-2008, 05:15 PM
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Fear Not Change
To fear change is to fear life
And a life of fear can never change

Embrace the unknown and the coming
In change there is motion
And in motion there is life
So if living what is there to fear
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Old 07-15-2008, 07:09 PM
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beautiful penning and absolutely right
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Hmmm - I'm afraid this one is a bit confusing for a greeting card. It's an interesting write I suppose - but it reads as if it's unfinished in a way. I think it needs to be edited just a bit to clarify the knowledge you're actually espousing... That is to say it's a bit of a mind-bender LOL - Thanx for posting though

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First let me say Tom I have enjoyed everything that I have read of yours and I appreciate that you get this one...

Ms.Jacquii this wasn't originally written to be a greeting card its way to complicated for most tastes. This was just the only place I saw for quotes and I thought that the people that got it would really enjoy it....I do appreciate the comments but this is a very polished piece and I couldnt change it cause it says volumes with very little effort. I hope that you will continue to be as honest on my future writes...

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Hey MARC - well if there is anything I ever am - it's honest lol
But I think your piece may need a bit of punctuation to make clear the premise
Especially the last line - It just reads........ strangely - I'm not sure which word I should put emphasis on. The punctuation will make it more understood.

You do know we have a wonderful library of quotes in our Random Quote system - I just have not transferred them all to the new style rotation as of yet...

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Well now I feel kinda embarrassed as I misunderstood you...Puncuation is change that defiantly can hapen....
You mentioned your quote system but Im sure I am not the only one with allot of them stuck in there head but just cant find a place on here to pen them....
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LOL - no prob... And yes - feel free to pen your quote in the Random Quote system - If I like it - I may even approve it

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