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Old 04-06-2008, 03:56 PM
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The Memory of Her Voice
The Memory of Her Voice

The sound of her voice, is like a butterfly
As it drifts along, lazily , lovely, with out a care
The words fall from her lips like a butterfly flits its wings
A voice as beautiful as evening songs floating in the wind
The sound of her voice brightens my day but the moment soon fades away
And all I have is nothing but the memory of your voice
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The Memory of Her Voice

The sound of her voice, is like a butterfly
As it drifts along, lazily , lovely, with out a care
The words fall from her lips like a butterfly flits its wings
A voice as beautiful as evening songs floating in the wind
The sound of her voice brightens my day but the moment soon fades away
And all I have is nothing but the memory of your voice
Dear Bear,

This is beautiful as I expected it to be...lol...I made a few suggestions in bold as well. This poem lingers as your poems do and one can almost feel the song. Stunning Bear.

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thank you so much Painted sometimes writing late at night I had letters lol thinking Im just using the singlular form thank you for your great comment
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This is awesome, beautiful words man. BRAVO. You inspire me, keep it up
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Thank you so much Eric and I am happy that I inspire you keep up the great writing
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