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Old 03-24-2008, 01:38 AM
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LOL TOM - the poem you sent me via PM is a different edit than both of those versions --- Thing is --- I like the version you sent via PM a little better - the line structure is more.................succinct and poetic I say... and the use of the word "our" in line 4 as opposed to "their" makes the poem a little more intimate - I'll get to work on the graphic a little later I think you'll like it too - the pic is SAUCY like hot wings

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A soft silken kiss like that of a rose petal
Exposes the passion within as two lovers indulge
In an evening of sultry dancing
Holding each other close our bodies sway and twirl
A soft gentle sigh escapes from her soft ruby lips
Followed by an evanescent smile and her faint whisper,
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Old 03-24-2008, 10:41 AM
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That is soooo much better! Very intimate. Whew! The image I got made me feel like a peeping Gail, lol.

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thank you so much Jacquii
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thank you so much gail
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Old 03-30-2008, 08:45 PM
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Okey Dokey! Thanx so much TOM for your beautiful poem - I hope you like the sizzling graphic I chose to accompany it! It's now on GreetingsGalleryOnline.com

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Old 03-31-2008, 06:09 AM
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LOVE IT Jacquii love the picte and everything great work on both cARDS
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Dear Bear and Ms Jacquii,

These cards are wondrous and stunning as well. Beautiful words Tom painted on these eCards...just Ms Jacquii...what can I say..you are incredible with graphics! Love it!

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