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[adult content] The Ladies Tailor - Part I
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Old 05-08-2008, 03:45 PM
 
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aaah! haha...I will read those later then! lol!

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The Whole Idea Behind This Long Story Of Six Parts Has Been The Virgin Hand And Mind Of The Writer Writing Something That he Has Not Really Experienced Before. being An Indian, The Concept And The Subjects Of Elements Are All Indian. I Could Have Written Something Very Refined As I Have Done A Masters'. But, Then Everybody Does The Same. I Have Tried To Enact The Mind Of A half Literate Person With A Dream Of A Woman That He Can Achieve Only In His Dream...Suddenly Happens To Someone Write In Front Of Him. He Starts Writing About It With Trembling Hands And A Trembling Mind.

I Waited To Hear From You All And Then Wished To Remark This Ability That I have tried. I Have Not heard Of Anyone Doing So...So Far.

I Want To Thank Dave Kuzminski + Nomadi + MsJac For All Their Wonderful Comments.


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I have only read the first part, but I would say you have done a masterful job of showing a half-literate person's thoughts and writings....it was easily understood by me and I liked the story line itself. I will have to get to the other parts soon.

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I Am Sure That You Will Find It Very Tiltilating read...Nomady.


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