Thank you to everyone who took precious time to read and comment. This indeed is a work in progress and a shell as indicated, and will work on all suggestions given.
AMZY!!!! Thank you and no need for a thick skin, this is a shell, and this story needs a hell of a lot of work. I was patiently waiting for your critique. You have been a blessing, a dear friend, and a tough critic, and I am grateful for all the time put in to helping me be the best I can be, as this is not the first time. I do want this to be the best that it can be, as this will be my first book as well. I value your opinion as well as everyone else's.
Ms Mango, I too am crazy about technical things, and the technicalities will be worked through, as this is just the beginning of a very, very, long process for me to add, revise, edit, etc., complete, and become publisher ready. This is just a shell, as indicated in the statement above the story. Thank you for taking precious time to read and comment.
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Thanks to everyone!
