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Dairy of a country Love chapter 2
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Old 05-20-2007, 09:57 PM
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Dairy of a country Love chapter 2

[continued from Chapter 1]


Reading I fall asleep with the diary in my hand. In a very deep sleep my mind plays back what I had read in the diary. I start to dream of Alexis, I sensed her in the room, smelled the aroma of jasmine sneaking up on me and taking my senses captive. Lying on my side I felt a breeze as sheets lifted and she slid into the bed behind me. Alexis slender arms wrapped around me and I felt the pleasurable sensation of the soft, naked roundness of her breasts pressed against my back, Her long legs so warm and silky smooth were woven through mine. Rolling over onto my back, my arms reached for Alexis and wrapping her in an embrace pressing her fragile body against the hard muscles of my chest as I nuzzle and kiss the hollow of her throat and the sweet valley between her breasts. Her silky hair fell softly against my skin as she returned my kisses. As our lips met, A passion exploded deep inside us, suddenly a loud crash of thunder wakes me up,
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I start rubbing my eyes as I try to focus on the clock to see the time. Damn its only three A.M. getting up and picking up the diary I go to the couch. I watch as the lightening flashes all around, “Now that’s a beautiful scene”. I pick up the Diary and start to read more pages. Thinking to myself that Brodie is a very lucky man to have this woman love him so dearly.
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Dear Diary
This is the saddest day of my life, my soul mate and love has been taken from me after the short wonderful time together God has decided that he is needed in heaven, I still feel his presents as I sit here alone crying, wondering well I ever be able to love again. Well there ever be another man who can sweep me off my feet and make me his like Brodie had. Brodie’s last words to me were.
‘Oh, Alexis, I've never known such beauty, you are more of a woman than I have ever expected to have loving to me."

With that last passage I knew that I had to find her. In the morning I called the realtor and asked if he had an address for Alexis saying that I wanted to send her a thank you card, but he didn’t have an address and told me that she had went to Lake Tahoe before going east. I didn’t know what to do, how was I going to find her. I decided to call a private investigator and asked him if he could find Alexis, I gave him all the info that I had. Within three days James Long called me and told me he had a fix on the area she went to and to meet him at his office in two hours. I arrived early because I was so excited I wanted and needed to know where she was located. Shaking James’ hand he then handed me a file and in it was a plane ticket to Davenport, Iowa so being from the Midwest I had an idea of the area. But the file didn’t have an address, I knew I could find out by calling information and seeing if she had a phone service hooked up. Shaking James hand again and thanking him and settling my bill, he then takes me to the airport and I board the plane to Iowa. As the plane takes off I fall asleep because I haven’t been sleeping well since I found this diary, as I drift off, thinking of Alexis the dreams begin again something I can’t stop, that I don’t want to stop.

Feeling her kisses on my neck and her nibbling on my earlobe I whisper into her ear that I need her. She looks into my eyes and smiles I tell her” she is the most beautiful woman that I’ve ever known, as I softly kiss her while caressing her back. There we are cuddling and caressing, kissing, whispering softly of what dreams may be. Then I hear another voice but its not Alexis, the stewardess says Sir, sir wake up we are about to land and you have to fasten you seat belt and put your seat in an upright position. Sorry sir that I had to waken you. You seem to be having a very nice dream.

Embarrassed I try to hide my erection. Slowly compositing myself as the plane lands, I depart the plane into the terminal and pick up my bag and go to the nearest hotel and check in before starting to look for Alexis. Waking the next morning I start to call around with no luck, I’ve called the phone company, the utilities companies, in a few hour I have another appointment with a private investigator. I decide to go to a bar and have lunch and a couple drinks unknown to me the bar maid is the woman, Im trying hard to find.

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Great ideas behind this story, Bear!
A couple of loose ends yet - How did Brodie die? Does Alexis recognize you in the bar?
Why did the airline attendant have an erection?LOL! - Last paragraph you wrote:
"Embarrassed, I try to hide HIS erection"!
You're right - you do need an editor!
Still - I can't wait for chapter 3!
There IS going to be a chapter 3, isn't there?
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Thank you so much Tree First They dont know each other, two she never said how he died, that we'll find out when he finds her maybe lol it wasnt the flight attendant that had the eroction and I fixed that lol
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