PaintedDiary

Dear Ms Stardust,

Thank you so so much for a second read Ms Stardust and for your contagious enthusiasm and continued support! I am honored by your commentary. Yes, the help on this was beyond my imagination and I am so grateful to all those who helped me achieve the entry as it should be read. Thank you again. Take Care.

Kim

stardust

Dear Ms. Kim:
I am reading your story over again. I am also reading all the wonderful comments that you have got. You got so many people reviewing your story and reading it. Wooowww!!
When are you going to publish your book, sweetheart?? I hope, you may send me one copy at home. Will you?? I can´t wait to get your book...You are an awesome writer and poetess, Ms. Kim. Congratulations!! Thank you for sharing your talents with us!!
If I don´t post so much, it is because I have serious health problems in my dear family. But, I shall return for sure!! God bless!!
(((Hugs))) Cordially, Starry.

butchiesmom

This is really getting polished, Sis! I love it. I was wondering though about the tense of the piece. Will this whole story being written as if it's in the past and she's writing it down well after the fact? That's the vibe I'm getting from it. Not that anything's wrong with it, I was just wondering.

hugs,
Gail

PaintedDiary

I am finished with this entry Gail and yes for the tense....her diary entries are past tense and not so "well after the fact as you say", and yes have already happened. So far..I did not want her diary entries to be of what she dreamed, for this is real, nor did I want them to be what she predicted will happen, so I went with the traditional Dear Diary in the past tense which makes sense. I am still working on the other entries and don't quite know where I am going yet.

Kim