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the idea of a prophecy is quite tired out to me,
the concepts aside of that in your writing are pretty good,
why does she have to be blonde with green eyes is my only question?

I liked the medieval setting, and theres' certianly possibilities for this at this point,
realize when I comment i'm only a poet I don't understand or write stories that well,

I hope that a great direction in thi splot a brilliant moment come sto you if that happens I would love to read further as is its a good story with potential and decent writing.



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guess the green eyed blonde was the first thing which popped in my mind, lol. i'm not sure where it's going but i'll be going along for the ride, lol
thanks for taking the time to read this and leave your opinion. I really need it.
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