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It's untitled as of now, if you have Ideas let me know.
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It's untitled as of now, if you have Ideas let me know.
Robbie-
Freshman year was the worst, I am so excited to be a sophmore. Now I am just that much closer to being an upperclassman. I have a good feeling about this year.
And MMM That cheerleader was completely checking me out at the assembly this morning. It was like she was raping me with her eyes, only it's not rape if you like it.
Ellie-
Yes, I admit regrettably, I am a freshmen; but those upperclassmen don't scare me. They're big, but I can manuever around them. Who says being short has to be a disadvantage? They may even be bitchy, but so what, don't make me put on my bitch face. You may just have to change your pants.
There really isn't much to fear in highschool besides upperclassmen; so I'm basically set. The classes aren't that hard, homework isn't nearly as suffocating as they make out, and luch tastes pretty good.
Unfortunately the boys aren't very hott either. Pretty much they look the same as last year except some have patches of fuzzy facial hair. It's a big let down really.
Robbie-
I forgot how much homework blows. It's the fucking first day and already I have thirty problems in Algebra-trig, and a two page minimum essay due for Advanced English Ten. It's due thursday, what fun.
I've been blessed w/ 2nd lunch, so I don't even get to eat until 1:22. Damn, I'm ready to eat my textbook by 10. It's a long way to lunch and now, Gym.
My gym shorts are way too tight, they barely fit on, and leave nothing to imagination. Coach Rumbelow is an ass and wont switch them out for me. So now all the girls in my class have easy access to my package, not that I have anything to hide...
Ellie-
My friends are lame; they keep fawning over Robbie Johnson. Seriously they better snap out of it before they drown in puddles of drool. Those two cannot believe I don't think highly of him, but sing his praises more than enough to make up for me.
We saw him in the hallway before lunch, he looked out of breath. I could see the perspiration wet his hair. Gross, hasn't he heard of showers? Callie and Alyssa named the look "rugged and sexy" I didn't even try to hold in my laughter. It exploded out just as we walked by him, drawing his eye. Of course my brilliant friends stared, openmouthed and red. How great is that.
Robbie-
It's so weird, they stare at me the whole lunch, those two girls. I can see them watching me eat, and socialize. When I make eye contact they look away, though only for a second. It's seriously starting to creep me out. I remember them, from the hall; the redfaced girls and their friend.
It's the friend that interests me. She looked amused, while the other two only looked embarrassed. I didn't see her look at me once, not even once during lunch. I wonder what her name is?
The bell rings and we all reluctantly go to class.
I have Italian 1 last block. The school fucked up my schedule last year so I didn't have a foriegn language. I thought it was cool then; I had two study halls. But now I have to have Italian w/ a bunch of freshmen, sounds great.
Ellie-
My last block of the day, and then I get to go home and sleep: Italian. I didn't want to take Spanish, thats too boring. Italian seems interesting and now if I ever decide to go to Italy, I'm set.|
The teacher holds out a hat as we file through the door; she tells us to pick a slip of paper. Mine reads: Isabella. Italian names, of course; we had those throughout Spanish too.
I was surprised to see Robbie take a seat in the back of class; I'd thought he was a sophmore. Once he gets comfortable I go back to not acknowledging him, although I can't help but think he is a bit cuter when he isn't panting or dripping w/ sweat.
Robbie-
She is in my Italian class. Her seat is three rows in front of me, to the right. I can see her face when she looks at the clock, but not her deep blue eyes. The teacher is taking attendance. "Isabella", as Ms. Piranio calls this I see her raise a hand, mumbleing here. At least now I have a name for her.
My Italian name is Mario. I can already hear my friends laugh. Too bad I don't have a big mustache or a newsboy cap. But maybe by the end of the Semester I can get the accent down.
Ellie-
Alyssa and Callie meet me by my locker and again they are talking about Robbie. Gah, when will it end? They say he was eying them at lunch, checking them out. Of course if anyone stared at me for the entire lunch period, I would look at them a few times; but I keep the thought to myself.
I can see why they've fallen for him. If he looked at me w/ his blue-green eyes, my feelings of indifference might waver. HIs wavy brown, almost black hair looks much better when it isn't matted with sweat. The combination is quite astonishing actually. My latter impressions of him are an improvement on the opinions I made at first glance.
*End Chapter one*
What'd ya think? What should I title it? How was it? Tell me please!
Goodbye thanks in advance.
Julia
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Dear Live With A Passion,
First, I wanna say that I love the ebb and flow diary entries of Robbie and Ellie's mind dance. It is intriguing to say the least, and I see this daily as a teacher myself. It also indicates that they will eventually become friends or possibly more. I have to wait for the next installment. I also like the way you are depicting Robbie, not real cocky, and not overly confident either. Ellie is true to form as she truly was not impressed with Robbie until later. Later, Robbie also noticed Ellie, and did not so much concentrate Ellie's friends, checking him out. I can't wait for the next installment. Nice work!
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