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Piano Man part one
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Old 07-06-2007, 02:56 PM
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Piano Man part one

Piano Man
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Tanner Mc Cloud has been writing the music for his new show "Emotions For Lust". He'd hired the orchestra, but the main focal point was still missing. He needed a dancer, but not just any dancer, she had to have a special quality, a special eccentricity. He didn't want a stripper, what he wanted, what he needed was a choreographer and a dancer. Someone who could feel the intense passionate and movements of his works, To make it into an erotic dance.

Sitting at his work table, trying to write an ad for the newspaper, countless amounts of scrap paper hit the floor.

How can I find what I need, if I can't word out what I want to say, he told himself.

He put his head on the table and it landed with a slight thud. "Ok here we go again, he said.

Wanted: Female choreographer/dancer. Someone with an insight to make the movements, speak the erotic, intense and sate rhythm of my music. Apply in person, bring photos and resume to 17256 W. State Street. between 9 a.m. and 3p.m.

Lana was fed up with her job, her boss and the hours she had to work. Being a cashier wasn't what she intended to do with her life. She was a dancer. A choreographer. But that kind of business was hard to break into, unless you knew someone, or were one of the few "lucky ones" that have everything handed to them, and that certainly wasn't her, that she knew.

It was not likely she was ugly, or couldn't dance, on the contrary. She was beautiful, and had excellent moves. She just hadn't had the money to pursue her career.

Lana picked up the newspaper and started reading through the want ads. She was looking for a new job, The job of her dreams. After looking through the want ads she throws the paper down in frustration. Nothing jumped out at her, nothing interested her. As she picked up the mess, she'd noticed an ad that had been misplaced. Grabbing the paper again she began to read.

Wanted: dancer/choreographer for a new show, need someone with an insight to create dance for my music of intense and erotic. Apply in person Mon. through Thurs. at 17256 W. State Street
9a.m. to 3p.m. Must bring resume and photos.

This was it! The job she had always wanted! It had been her desire since she graduated from college. All weekend she worked on her resume. With her friend's help to take pictures of her in different poses, she would be all set for the interview. She was going to get this job no matter what it took. Monday finally arrived and the first thing Lana does was to call in sick. Then she goes to the audition. When she arrives, there are two other women, but they don't look very confident in what they need to do during the audition.
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It was now Lana's turn. She walks to the stage. Tanner introduces himself. he starts to ask Lana questions. While she answers his questions, Tanner reads her resume and looks at her photos spread out on his desk in front of him. On a yellow legal pad he starts writing down some notes about Lana. Five feet seven inches tall, long blond hair, beautiful hour glass figure and strong smooth ,yet sleek, powerful long legs. Tanner gets up from his desk walks over and sits down at his piano He begins playing something with an up beat tempo he watches Lana as she begins dancing through the next part of the interview.

Then Tanner stops playing, and Lana (slightly out of breath) sits down to wait for his comments. He starts writing again, Ms. Lana: Great leaping abilities, (not trashy) has very erotic and sultry movements. Prides herself with character, with an innocence of sorts yet with coy ways.
The interview was ends in a mellow tone. Tanner tells her he has a couple more people to interview and he would let her know in the next day or two if she was accepted for the job.

Lana felt great about her audition, but the look on Mr. Mc Cloud's face didn't seem too her that he was too impressed, nor did he show any interest in her performance.

So on the following Tuesday she went back to work, not expecting to hear anything further about the new job, nor Mr. Tanner Mc Cloud When she returned home after work, she checked her phone messages. Hearing nothing from Mr. Mc Cloud about her interview, she went to bed early. During the night Lana had an erotic dream.

The hot smoky air was filled with the flowing sounds, in sensual tones of the ivory keys of the piano man. He smiles in her direction and plays on, as he weaves a musical net, exquisitely catching to the ears. The mood is right, He stops playing, moving his hands along her hips they dance all through the night to a high strong consistent howling of a hungry saxophone joyful tears flow in the depths of Lana's heart. as she was being kissed her mouth opens slightly in the passions's velvet grip, and moans to those lamentable wails of the sax. Lost in the moment of the passion, transfixed on the beat, she surrenders to the hungers of desires unspoken. They circle the room like wild animals on the prowl, being drawn to the quiet, dark, secluded corner, where none can see, no one but him. His hot roving hands alive under her skirt as her back arches, pressing against the shadowed wall. Filled with deep grinding passion The music filling her with desire.

The dream abruptly ends awakened by the ringing of the phone.
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Old 07-06-2007, 06:30 PM
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WOW Bear!!

I really love this HOT story! It's so romantic!
The imagery is right out there on the front of the stage!

It looks like Lana has the HOTS for The Piano Man already. Her erotic dream told her that.
I am looking forward in reading Part two!!!

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Dear Bear ,

This is wonderful my friend. I am just sitting here smiling and thinking of oh how I need to take piano lessons. LOLOL Awesome, and you have done a fine job! Remember what we talked about regarding these stories!

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