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Inspiring Novelists Aspiring to be a novelist? JPiC is in the business of inspiring and novelists are definitely welcome... So post your longer works in this section. (Only stories over 300 words please.)
Ah, the beach. Enjoyed by all.

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Vladimir felt full after his first repast of the day when he felt an urging. The summer weather had convinced him to pause as he was about to pass by the beach. Lured by the gentle sounds of the swells rolling onto the shore, he made his way over the sand and stopped among some tall sand dunes where he stripped until he wore only a skimpy, black Speedo that matched his black fingernails quite perfectly.

With his clothes rolled into a bundle, he exited the dunes and walked onto the beach. As he approached the water, he inhaled deeply of the salt air, taking the wonderful texture into his lungs where it seemed to settle with a feeling that he was totally alone without a care in the world on a beach ....

Vlad was amazed to discover that he wasn't alone after all. Not more than a hundred feet away on the beach rested a voluptuous woman. Her alabaster skin shined more brightly than the sand that surrounded her beach towel. Struck by her unclad beauty, Vlad couldn't resist walking toward her for a closer look.

Almost immediately, she sensed his presence above her and opened her eyes to stare at him. "Could you stand off to the side, please? You're blocking my rays."

Vladimir obligingly stepped to the side while continuing to admire her raw beauty. Desperate for an excuse to remain near her, he asked, "Would you mind if I join you in soaking up some rays?"

"It's a free beach. However, if you're going to stay, you might want to know that this section of beach was legally set aside for nudists only. You'll have to take that off if you're not passing through."

Vlad glanced down at his Speedo. He grinned weakly at the woman as she watched him with a twinkle in her eyes. "Promise you won't laugh?"

"I promise I won't laugh... at your moontan lines," she said softly while revealing some fang.

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Although we appreciate your many many many posts Dave...we have a policy to be sure to thank those who take time to read and comment on our work. I have noticed many many posts of yours that you did NOT thank the reader. Usually this PM is accompanied by an infraction, however, I wanted you to take time to review the posting policy and thank those people who read your work. Please halt your posting until thank yous have been posted on your already many posts. Thank you.

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I asked you to halt all postings until thank yous were posted. I see that you completely disregarded what I asked, and did what you wanted to do. This was also forwarded to Ms Jacquii.

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