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It The Everyday Struggle That Make The Man



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Posted By Wind on Dec 6, 2012 at 7:01 AM

Thank you for viewing and i hope you enjoy.I do NOT own picture nor music.I do OWN the poem.


It The Everyday Struggle That Make The Man





This struggle we live in,this world is or enemy and our friend we fight to see it beautiful.

Have you ever heard "I've given up all hope and am ready to die to day"I'm sorry but this is more this is

not some joke have you no heart have you no thought on what someone other then you have to deal with.

I want to see the smiling faces of everyone that a longing dream since the day i could walk,Dreams are

meant to be kept close,hearts are meant to be keep open,life is meant to be filled to the fullest.How can

you say forget it and go and prepare to be put 6 feet under? I'm taking on life building up this life to see a

better future for those who think they have none.Who am I to say people are crazy when I myself am crazy.

Who has never been grief sicken in't human to the least.I say to those out there it is an everyday struggle

that make a boy into a man and a girl into a woman,

but if there is love there then this is what should be said"it is beautiful to love but to love is to know how to grieve".

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  1. Wind
    ^^ Your very welcome and thank you. I love this struggles despite everything.
    Dec 28, 2012
  2. butchiesmom
    ...it is an everyday struggle
    that make a boy into a man and a girl into a woman,
    but if there is love there then this is what should be said"it is beautiful to love but to love is to know how to grieve."

    You speak a truth here. ...to love is to know how to grieve. I don't think you realize how true this is until you have lost a loved one.

    Your work is always filled with a determination to keep going despite many obstacles and much pain. This kicks you in the butt and says get on with your life like I have.

    Thank you for posting this, Wind.

    Gail
    Dec 28, 2012
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