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Marcquoise



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Posted By Wind on Oct 17, 2012 at 10:41 PM

This is my poem called the Marcquoise. I will like to say I do not own the pictures in the video.

I hope you enjoy. It's for you who wants to see the poem with graphics.

Marcquoise
By Marcedies Rhodes

Let me breathe
Let me see
Let me hear
For I will captivate you
And you will fall

I will steal you
I will watch you bleed
I will see your tears
But you smile,why?
For I have stolen you?

Watch and fall
Watch and smile
Watch and let me keep you
I,with my sword and shield I rise with the sun and set with the moon
I,with my sword and shield I rise with the sun and set with the moon

Let me breathe
I will steal you
Watch and fall
Do you see me?
Now watch as I keep your heart and your mind

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Comments: 6 - Likes: 0 - Views: 923



  1. Wind
    Alright.Though i will feel a little odd i'll give it a go. And it will be twice embarrassing.
    Oct 24, 2012
  2. MsJacquiiC
    LOL - I think everything by Microsoft is a little idiotic - well - with the exception of Windows Vista & Windows 7 --- I think you should definitely recite your poetry in next videos though.
    Oct 24, 2012
  3. Wind
    Yes.it fun and a little idiotic but fine
    Oct 23, 2012
  4. MsJacquiiC
    Very kewl! I've never used Windows movie maker. May wanna give it a go when I have some free time.
    Oct 23, 2012
  5. Wind
    Yes, i used window's movie maker to create the video which took me about 30 minutes to make.And i decided to recite some of it but i have a very nervous and shy personality. I will add a song to my next one.
    Oct 20, 2012
  6. MsJacquiiC
    I do like this poem. Questions though: What software do you use to create the video? It's kinda kewl - but would be so much better if you had music in the background - or even recite the piece, as opposed to simply text only. Anyway - nice work!

    J.
    Oct 19, 2012
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