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Whats Perfection



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Posted By TheCoach757 on Sep 12, 2012 at 4:01 AM

Another spoken word poem written by JPiC Member TheCoach757

What's Perfection?

What's perfect? What's in perfection?
What's imperfection but perfect in reverse that's indirection
You have to find it in yourself like in reflection
Because the media's lies commit deception
Because of complexion
Blonde hair blues eyes taught to respect them
And if they're not a size two taught to neglect them
Because perfect is smaller
Unless you're talking about the dollar
Because if you're money's not greater than you're viewed less than
That's the equation
That we're currently facing
Because our inspirations
Have limitations
Hope I'm making it clear through all my statements
That our views on perfection are highly tainted
We should replace it
With the basics
Like no ones perfect and teach to embrace it.

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  1. MsJacquiiC
    It'd be sweet to hit the powerball one good time! I know this much LOL - anyway - hope you're enjoying the new site and hope you will post some more of your stuff in the forums. Feel free to check out other members' writing too ;)
    Sep 13, 2012
  2. TheCoach757
    thank you i really appreciate that and we all broke lol
    Sep 13, 2012
  3. MsJacquiiC
    Nice piece! You have such a rhythm about your style that I really appreciate. The content is stellar too:

    Because the media's lies commit deception
    Because of complexion
    Blonde hair blues eyes taught to respect them
    And if they're not a size two taught to neglect them
    Because perfect is smaller
    Unless you're talking about the dollar

    This section was too on point! And poignant to me, as I've struggled with weight issues all my life, and have been broke (moneywise) since 1975 LOL -- But seriously - nice piece!

    Thanks for sharing and hope you will post more ;)

    J.
    Sep 12, 2012
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