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You Won't See The Tears

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Posted By Wind on Dec 6, 2012 at 7:00 AM

Thank you for viewing and i hope you enjoy.I do NOT own the music nor picture.I do however OWN the poem.

You Won't See The Tears

No more, that all every tear shed comes back tens times harder then when shed. You say I'm blind,

blind to how you feel to what you think and the feeling that you proven as if yet. This what is this? This is

nothing to me I will become a rock unable to move to the places you see fit and deem them favourly.This

thing takes time takes time to break it like a city your unable to penetrate and destroy. This life and time tears

are seen pure weakness from the rather studded mind it makes me thing less of this world with each passing

day. What is it when everything can't be seen for it true color hiding behind a mask of pure deception. This wall

to block out a world, which doesn't favor me in the least bit, has come to pure rain, rain and more rain. I shall not

let no man see this tears for they are the only thing that belong to me and me alone.

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  1. Wind
    Thank you so much.
    Dec 28, 2012
  2. butchiesmom
    I am stone, a rock you can not break with your tears. I put up a wall to protect myself from a world filled with pain and a mask to hide the tears I don't want to share with the world.

    Your work speaks of immense pain suffered but also of a determination to continue despite it. I admire your strength and determination and your courage. It's difficult, if not almost impossible, to expose yourself to the world in this manner.

    Thank you, Wind, for yet another glimpse into your world.

    Dec 28, 2012