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Old 04-06-2007, 07:08 PM
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Lounging restlessly..oh sweet Nessie
in darkness keeping, wailing, weeping
beneath fathomless ebbies
flow thunderous Loch Ness
bluish brackish swirly sea…storm brewing
sailors and nymphs join angels singing
sad songs reign…a hurricane
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wow...i love it....very strong visuals....

I can feel the cold waters in this one. You painted a great picture, nomad.
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Dear Nomad,

This was an awesome abstract, but the visuals, and the flow were right on point!!! One could feel, and you placed me there. Fantabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sailors and nymphs join angels singing
sad songs reign…a hurricane
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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Thanks dazamaru and PD...for reading and commenting!!!!! I appreciate the input guys!!

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Ha! I thought this was quite nice actually - even so abstract - but graspable...
Never have I known anyone to give the Loch Ness Monster a name - I think Nessie fits
And even better - the write coincides with the Personification Challenge I just posted
I was feeling lucky indeed - but nice to have come upon this piece of abstract delicious.
Though - I suppose I do tend to be scared of the bigger storms - Watchout now - NESSIE's a big'un LOL

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Well, I can't take credit for the name...I believe it's the name the locals (in Scotland) use for "her".

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Well, I can't take credit for the name...I believe it's the name the locals (in Scotland) use for "her".

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LOL - and here I am thinking you are creative tehehehe

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