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DISCLAIMER------> Please be advised that this is ONLY FICTION and by NO means reflects my opinion of any religious sector, and is not meant to be offensive. This is only poetry, and I do have a SLIGHT reputation for and an interest in the Scandalous, and Erotica. Inspiration came from some photographs found on Nora Geist's Website, well known for Contraversal and Erotic Art.. Having said that, please STOP now, if you may be offended.
Father I
Confession Booth, ready for my arrival
Green light on, I remove my habit, heavy burden, so I knelt
my tears run like the Nile, consciously staining my Bible
thoughts of him exploring my body, as I taste below
Orion’s Belt
Bless me Father, for I have sinned
Red light now on, I confess about him
Father, I cannot resist this carnal playground
euphoric desire, as if my legs were joined with pearls
pure ecstasy, my lascivious screams reduced to sotto voce sounds
your cloth still damp with lust of our secret secular world
Bless me Father, for I have sinned
Red light now off, in confession booth
lifting my holy dress to accept him
Father, I cannot resist this carnal taboo
the way you polish my pearls with
slippery tongue, tantalizes my bayou
Bless you Father, about to sin
Red light now on, confession yet to be revealed
ripping your cloth, emphatic vibrations out and in
your heavenly screams must be concealed
I Bless you Father, with my luscious lips sealed
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PD!!! WHY do you do this to us????
Giving us only PART of the story!
Making us WAIT for the rest!
Oh you teaser, you!
LOL!
Good thing you put the disclaimer on it!!!
Fantastic work!
Now get back to it! LOL!
You've left me breathless with anticipation and
Pink Tree is turning BLUE!!!! LOL!
- Tree.
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Hmmm...never been to confession myself, but I don't think you're very far off with what some women are feeling, even IF IT IS only fictional...I've heard some pretty taboo things about women going after the priests...and I can't say I blame them that much, some of those guys are TOO cute!!
All in all, though...I agree with Tree...Teaser!! LOL! You sure pushed the bar on this one...the forbidden, of course, is always that much more titillating when you take it someplace where no one has gone before....in the name of art...
I think you accomplished your mission...the scandalous part! LOL!
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*claps* Wow PD! I love this one. It makes them be human, reminds the reader that even clergy are susceptible to the fallacies of mankind... though I don't see desire or passion as a sin...
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Thank you all for taking precious time to read and to comment.
Ms Tree!!! I would not be me, if I didn't leave a little for next time, lolol. I am sooo glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for the PM's as well. I do love to tease, and I get enjoyment in all your comments. Will keep you posted! Thanks for everything sis!!
Ms Jeez!!!, you say you write instead. Yes, you do, and we also know we have something in common, LOLOLOL!!! Thanks for reading Ms Jeez!
Ms Nomad!!!, yes I do love to tread in Scandalous waters, as it lives in my capillaries at times. I did push the envelope on this, and I would not have written any other way. Yes, there is so much going on, and we may not even know. Thanks for reading!
Ms Sealiah!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I could NOT have said it any better. Yes, minus the cloth, they are people living as we do. That was so beautiful to read, and you worded the statement beautifully!!!!! I too, do not view passion and desire as a sin. I kept that theme, being this was a Priest and Nun. Thank you for reading!!!!
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