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Old 12-07-2006, 09:08 PM
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Dream girl...
those luscious pumps you
never quite learned
to trump on orchids with; Never
tautly and succinctly
taught to ignore the dandelions with
precious child you. Dream
girl. You have your dreams.

And Spring awaits you in December?
The wildabeest lusts
after you girl... Dream!

Listen to the Christmas lights,
the bulbs speak to you
(solemn snow flake
that you are) Dream fairies
girl.

Stardust and magnolia blooms
for you. No dismay girl. Dream love!

Dream girl...
those luscious pumps
you never quite learned
to stomp on daffodil fir with...
They're me girl.

Dream freedom.
Dream love.

Then whisper them to me
in MY dream.

And smile honeysuckle, magnolia
blossom & violet. Smile
the scent of peach
and love Tennessee.

Love me
girl. I am your home.


Copyright © 2006 Jacquii Cooke

I was listening to the "Dreamgirls" soundtrack with Beyonce and a whole cast of allstars and was so moved by Deena's (sp?) performance - this poem just sprang to mind... Funny - I've never seen any rendition of show - but the song "I am telling you..." vividly comes to mind... This is an abstract poem of me telling my love to DREAM and visit me in my dreams



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Old 12-07-2006, 09:21 PM
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MsJ - You continue to astound me! To me, this sounds like what every woman should be telling that woman in her mirror!



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Old 12-16-2006, 06:49 AM
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Thanx MS TREE - I have been tending to write in the abstract lately...
Hard to put my life in perspective, other THAN abstract lol - Thanx for your comment!

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Ms Jacquii....how the hell did I miss this!!!! This was refreshing, rhythmic, soulful, free, omnipotent, and like a brand new pair of shoes. Reading this, I also sensed Ms Diana Ross----->I'm comin out!!! I want the world to know...got to let it show!!! One cannot just read this, this cries to be read out loud!!! You are a master craftswoman of this art form called Poetry. Yes, women united!! Simply awesome!!!!! I love your work; you are unpredictable, and supply us that Ms Jacquii fix we need. Fantabulous girl. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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msJ this was put togther well and had it going on



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Thanx KIM & ERIK - very nice comments both

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