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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)

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Old 04-12-2008, 12:16 PM
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She walks with her head held low,
No one need see her overflowing eyelids and blackened eyes.
She hasn't brushed her hair for days.
She wears long sleeves for a reason.
Crossing roads without looking,
Because the consequences don't seem to matter anymore.



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just ....Very right here. here it is...so sad the concept, the poem, the images, the life that some are living just like this. There is so much I want to say and I will be back, and that title captured my eye as well.

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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment, much appreciated

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She walks with her head held low,
No one need see her overflowing eyelids and blackened eyes.
She hasn't brushed her hair for days.
She wears long sleeves for a reason.
Crossing roads without looking,
Because the consequences don't seem to matter anymore.
I am sooooo in awe! The vivid images! Wow!

Long sleeves, unkempt appearance, head down to hide the tears coming from blackened eyes, crossing the street without looking because nothing really matters anymore including her personal safety.

My God! (I don't use that phrase lightly) The images of abject dejection and sorrow! It radiates from these few words!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!

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not sure why gail, but i never noticed your comment on this before!
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im extremely glad you thought so highly of it (: (:
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