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Honeysuckle Dream in Cynicism
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Biography: Jacquii Cooke is a 32 year old Black Poet from Oak Ridge, Tennessee. As Webmistress of Poetry in Color Forum, she is devoted to the more abstract styles, especially those with a strong feminine voice that center around the topic of redemption and righting the wrongs of past transgressions.
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Honeysuckle Dream in Cynicism
Honeysuckle Dream in Cynicism
Symphony:
Cicadas warm wings, other extremities
in 4/4 time; Mother Nature glimpses,
glances, gleans reverie.
January 54°
(midday childmade snowangels
in our minds of course: honeysuckle
dream in cynicism)
snowcream, chilidogs, corndogs,
hushpuppies and even wetter dreams
ebonied emory.
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Comment: Tennessee is absolutely BEAUTIFUL with me in it!
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Twas like a quick flash dance of visuals...from my childhood. I liked the way this work pounced upon one thought and landed upon another...kinda like my mind works! Beautiful words for the memory to relaunch...ahhhh. Thank you!
Ps....Elvis NEVER died...it's a conspiracy, don't you know that?
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Dear Ms Jacquii,
I love the symbolism of the cicada. The cicada males (to be to scientifically correct, lol) are a philharmonic symphony indeed when en masse. I also love the symbol of the 4/4 score. Ya know the cicada stays underground for 17 years, and the nature metaphors to me plays a part in my mind thinking of change, nature changing. That second stanza demands respect as it ignites the poetic jute box. I love the third stanza as you refer to the cicada cousins, lol, if you will. Ain't nothin better than a corn-cob pipe, and Elvis lives damn it!!!!!! LOL!!!!! Loved it Ms Jacquii!!!!
Biography: Jacquii Cooke is a 32 year old Black Poet from Oak Ridge, Tennessee. As Webmistress of Poetry in Color Forum, she is devoted to the more abstract styles, especially those with a strong feminine voice that center around the topic of redemption and righting the wrongs of past transgressions.
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LOL - thanx YAWL for the nice comments... May explain this one a bit, but for now = NOPE... Wanna keep some of the mystery for myself
i like the way you throw words that seem disconnected and let the reader sit there trying to figure it out and when they get to the end of the poem it makes sense but it wasnt they that figured out the piece...it was the piece that figured out them and let them in on the secret. one point of contention....didnt like elvis anyway
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Originally Posted by MsJacquiiC
LOL - thanx YAWL for the nice comments... May explain this one a bit, but for now = NOPE... Wanna keep some of the mystery for myself
Jacquii.
Dear Ms Jacquii,
You have kept me in suspense long enough about this fantabulous write! I think it is time for us to know the inspiration for, and catalyst behind this little wonder. LOL Another excellent rating!
Kim
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