MiscellaneousHave a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...) stanza from collab, just a little different
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to have a good vocabulary is a matter of perseverence .... to use it with such elegance is a gift....
love it!!!!
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Thank you so much for taking precious time to read and to comment. I am most grateful. I am so happy you enjoyed this solo. Also, as per our conversation in chat, I am honored by your comment, especially from someone of your caliber. Thank you joining our phenomenal community.
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Oh my God Amazing, you rock my world. Let's make thoughts bloom, make sweet poetry together, lol, LOVE IT
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Thank you so much for taking precious time to read and comment. You are an inspiration and I am so happy you joined JPiC! I am glad you liked this and yes....absolutely....it would be an honor to write with you...especially from what I read of you...wow....I have to catch up to you! Lol...love ya'.
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Hello Kim!
Normally I don't have to research the words in a poem but with this one I had to because I could pretend like I knew what a few of them meant but I really wanted to know to better understand your poem. And, I must say, I'm glad I did! It adds another dimension to your poem with fully knowing what it's saying and it's neat to learn some words that I didn't know about.
I enjoyed reading this small poem of yours too and especially enjoyed the ending line. I always feel like I have a certain mask on and I believe that no one can be perfect and the imperfections of each person is what makes them well... them. So, I enjoyed this last line and how it fit in perfectly with what your poem had been saying and it just ended your poem nicely.
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Thank you Tom and Sarah! This is one of my better poems in all its brevity, lol...thank you both so very much for taking time to read and to comment! Means a great deal. Sarah...thank you dahling..lol...yes...often times what we mask is the most beautiful part of us.
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This is one of my better poems in all its brevity, lol...thank you both so very much for taking time to read and to comment! Means a great deal. Sarah...thank you dahling..lol...yes...often times what we mask is the most beautiful part of us.
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