MiscellaneousHave a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...) stanza from collab, just a little different
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At last a true test to my vocabulary power my Sister! Wow...OMG, it tis "Shockingly Sad." You have captured the elements of sadness till it itself seem to become forsaken from within itself. Another " Brilliant Write!" Painted One- Love Ya Big Sister!
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At last a true test to my vocabulary power my Sister! Wow...OMG, it tis "Shockingly Sad." You have captured the elements of sadness till it itself seem to become forsaken from within itself. Another " Brilliant Write!" Painted One- Love Ya Big Sister!
Thank you so much lil' brother...when I wrote this I was reading about Poe's and Chopin's lives and other things...and this was one result of that. I will call you and love you too !
Kim
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Dear Mysty,
Thank you sooo much for taking precious time to read and to comment. You are so right. We never do feel perfect, yet some place in a category as such. I am so happy you liked this write.
No ersatz veil to shadow my depth
once sotto voce, now a gravitas vignette
shards of menagerie mirrors reflect
the real me, no mask, and not perfect
Kim, honestly, the first time I read this my first reaction was I needed a dictionary. I was also in the process of cleaning and getting ready for my mom to visit for Easter and distracted so I decided to wait to comment on it.
Now I'm commenting! Got the dictionary out and couldn't find gravitas! Soooo I googled it and found out it was a depth of character (more or less) and thought this was so like you! I've always felt there's more to Kim than meets the eye and considering how deep I thought you were to begin with....wow, what a well!
Anyway, this describes you so perfectly! I'm so glad I was able to come back tonight and really enjoy it!
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Kim, honestly, the first time I read this my first reaction was I needed a dictionary. I was also in the process of cleaning and getting ready for my mom to visit for Easter and distracted so I decided to wait to comment on it.
Now I'm commenting! Got the dictionary out and couldn't find gravitas! Soooo I googled it and found out it was a depth of character (more or less) and thought this was so like you! I've always felt there's more to Kim than meets the eye and considering how deep I thought you were to begin with....wow, what a well!
Anyway, this describes you so perfectly! I'm so glad I was able to come back tonight and really enjoy it!
lubya Sis!
Gail
Dear Gail,
Thank you so much for taking precious time to read, research, and comment! Yes....there are many many layers and you hit it on the nail. Your comments are always ever so positive and uplifting...I love to read them. I am so happy you enjoyed this lil' poem of mine.
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Originally Posted by erikestabrook
just amazing Kim,
such advanced language,
yet stil a cohesive message,
and a beautiful one,
send this to the higher ups
Dear Erik,
Thank you so much for taking time to read and to comment. I am most grateful. I really felt this was cohesive, yet was concerned of the message not being absorbed because of the wording. However, when I looked back after writing..there were no other words I would have chosen. Thank you Erik and I will take your advice...I never thought to submit this...now I will.
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