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Old 11-12-2007, 02:39 AM
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This poem is directly inspired by the below drawing Tree Good posted in the
Poetry of the Visual section: Tree's Perspective. I think the drawing has
so much natural insight into who MS TREE is - that I couldn't really comment
on the piece without having gone back to what I know best: poesy.
So please enjoy and when you get a chance - please show MS TREE some
love for her beautiful artistry.

Jacquii.

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A cathedral in tones of wooden structure,
natural to the core like nakedness.
So inviting, the sun warm, the water crisp,
playful laughter abounds in this piece.

Looking beneath the exterior
into the interior of the hearts secret places
lies a maze of colour as intricately delicate
as pigmy orchids bathed in rose petal
and hyacinth.

Yes that I may know such a delicate heart
structured like the greatest
of redwoods.


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Old 11-12-2007, 02:58 AM
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Awesome work Ms Jacquii....... a Multifacetted jewel here both the poem and the Picture. Love them both.

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Old 11-12-2007, 07:30 PM
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Thanx so much MS MYSTY - I think your choice of "multi-faceted" jewel does very well in describing MS TREE's drawing - I'm glad you like the poem too = Thanx for the review and the love

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Wow! Great poem for an amazing drawing.... :]
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I love the poem - still not too sure about the picture! LOL!
"Yes that I may know such a delicate heart
structured like the greatest
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These lines, I find most touching. They could be applied to almost every woman I know! Sensitive souls with steel spines - the way a woman has to be, just to survive.
Fantastic poem and thank you again for such a great compliment on the drawing!



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Hey MS MANGO & MS TREE - I appreciate your comments!
I've been in a bit of a writing slump as of lately - so it was a joy to find TREE's drawing - It really sparked my imagination - quite a bit actually - So just a way to show the poetically artistic love! = I'm glad YAWL enjoyed the poem

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