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Long Day
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Long Day
Sometimes I wonder why
I try'cause it's so hot
and touching the sky
makes you fry
sooner or later I'll cry
what should I do?
drift some more
or
pack it in
are
you aware
of
our mistakes
in living life
it
could have been
so perfect and
all
we ever needed was a smile
sometimes I wonder why
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Unique spacing and a great title -
subject is one that everyone can relate to -
these made it a most interesting read!
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Thank you very much!
It's been around a while. I read it often, it has very deep meaning to me and I always hoped that it would have a reasonance when shared.
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Kit,
I like poems, and have written a few like these, that prompt the reader with the way the words are put down. I enjoyed this poem!
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Quote:
it
could have been
so perfect and
all
we ever needed was a smile
sometimes I wonder why
Jerry
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Thanks Jerry for your kind comments. This one is about 25 years old. I return to read it often.
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interesting penning Kit, makes me ponder about some things in my life
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Thanks Dude. Was me thinking out loud, about a particular girl, I believed it then and still wonder.
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