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Old 09-10-2008, 11:52 PM
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Sometimes I wish,
I were a machine -
I'd watch all of them
with eyes that kill.

I would work
around the clock;
rest would be
redundant to me.

There would be
no need for friends;
nor a need
for support.

I would stop
at absolutely nothing
to attain
the highest power.

There would be
no need for lovers,
for my heart
would be of stone.

When you look
into my eyes,
they will be blank;
they will be dead.

My eyes would be
empty
I will own no
soul

Just organs
encased in
a hard frame.
A machine.
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Old 09-11-2008, 12:43 AM
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oooh ... this reeks of pain .... internal pain. This is a very good write however a few ideas .. If you are a machine ..... why would you have a stone inside you? I would say you had no heart but a motherboard of wires and nodes or whatever those things are called.

Anyways Echappee .... interesting way to say you don't want to have feelings you don't want to deal with.

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Thanks Misty! Well I guess 'having a stone inside a machine instead of wires etc' just adds to the irony and 'warp-ness' of being a machine. It's as though it's so unheard of, so out-of-this-world that instead of finding computer chips inside a machine you'll find a dead, unmoving stone.
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