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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)

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Old 06-08-2007, 11:50 PM
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I look through your brown eyes,
With your content grin.
Wondering where has this little girl,
With the inquisitive mind had gone.
Yesterday, you were a baby,
Following me wherever I went,
And never wanted to be alone.
But now you have become independent.
You don't cling on me.
Or ask your cute questions.
As I watched you grow,
I still free that you need me.
I would shield you from the pain and drama.
The suffering and hate,
I have experience in this world.
That's if life would let me.
But I understand you need to grow,
And I don't want to be blamed.
For holding you back.
So, I must set you free,
For you to see what life has to offer you.
But in the back of my mind.
You're still the baby who clings to me.



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Old 06-09-2007, 12:20 AM
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the only thing i don't understand is why your giving us your 2003 works

the rest was pretty good



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Old 06-09-2007, 08:11 AM
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This is good
A poem about change, which is always nice
Thanks for sharing
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Dear Fabiloa,

such a beautiful reflection of the ltlle girl's evolution into independence. The values installed and the morals placed will carry her for the rest of her life. Awesome!

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Old 06-11-2007, 02:53 AM
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this was a wonderful reflection you shared of the natural process of parenthood. it seems to happens so fast after they're grown. i enjoyed the honesty in this. keep the ink spilling artist. cuidate`
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Old 06-11-2007, 05:25 PM
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Dear Fabiola:


This was beautiful. I enjoyed every word and every line!!
I have an 8 yr old daughter, and am not looking forward in seeing grow up and leave home. They grow so fast it seems like we can't keep up with their desires, loves, demands and changes.

Thank you for a lovely masterpiece!!

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Old 06-13-2007, 10:34 PM
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thanks for the kinds words.

this was about a girl i use to babysit. she is 16 now and i watched her grow through the years. she actually likes the poem too.
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