MiscellaneousHave a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...) free-verse
Mistress Night
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Mistress Night
Now mistress
night
arrives
Draping
a velvet cloak
over silky smooth shoulders
Spilling jewels
in her
wake
Below
I catch one
and rest it
In
your
eyes.
This one is for you Kim, hope that you like. It's celestial, it's about stars and it is for you if you want it.
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Originally Posted by Eric
Now mistress
night
arrives
Draping
a velvet cloak
over silky smooth shoulders
Spilling jewels
in her
wake
Below
I catch one
and rest it
In
your
eyes.
This one is for you Kim, hope that you like. It's celestial, it's about stars and it is for you if you want it.
Dear Eric (my muse),
I absolutely will take this and sooooooooooo much! You are my hero, lol
It is so beautiful and I adore and am enchanted by the stars. , how can your poetry be so good every time...I need you to teach me how to do that! Excellent rating, going into my favorites! I am gonna print this and put on my listy to do it in Calligraphy! This is very special and made me smile, as I needed that. It is indeed celestial and beautiful as well. Would make a lovely painting also!
Got me all teary-eyed now...
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This is some smoothe poetry ERIC with just a tinge of abstract that always makes for a beautiful read - I like this one very much - I've read it 4 times this evening/morning and it still makes me smile - there's a hint of mystery to this poem that I think describes MS KIM to a T!
Biography: Jacquii Cooke is a 32 year old Black Poet from Oak Ridge, Tennessee. As Webmistress of Poetry in Color Forum, she is devoted to the more abstract styles, especially those with a strong feminine voice that center around the topic of redemption and righting the wrongs of past transgressions.
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Originally Posted by solo
just cute
Is that all? Just cute?
Nothing else?
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sooooooooooo much! You are my hero, lol 
, how can your poetry be so good every time...I need you to teach me how to do that! Excellent rating, going into my favorites! I am gonna print this and put on my listy to do it in Calligraphy! This is very special and made me smile, as I needed that. It is indeed celestial and beautiful as well. Would make a lovely painting also! 
Kim
Just cute?