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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)

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Old 02-22-2008, 11:06 PM
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i don’t own anyone
but i owe a few…here and there
i wish i owed more
for the love given
and received in kind
but my account is all paid up
nothing from nothing…
~
i look forward each and every day
for the future
that i’m headed for
but all those factors…
people that
don’t know who i am…
i can’t understand the one i know
~
i’d never buy a soul
the one i’ve got
is worth so much…
if i could ever see it
put one and one together…
but it always equals zero
~
i’d never throw you away, babe
all i’ve got is me
and what you have to add
can make me whole…
i don’t own anyone
not even myself
but i’d like to add
you to me
and make it equal one
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7-23-1984



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Old 02-23-2008, 04:30 AM
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That was truly beautiful Mike.... best part is this

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i don’t own anyone
not even myself
but i’d like to add
you to me
and make it equal one
Exquisite.

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Old 02-24-2008, 04:25 PM
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Thank you very much Mysty...like I told someone else on another site...it is good to look at something like this from 24 years ago and know that there is a happy ending...that it can happen.



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Well I did the math on this one. It equals "EXCELLENT WRITE!" Very creative Kit Carson. It appears that you've found a way a long time ago (sum)-up life's values!



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Old 02-26-2008, 09:33 AM
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Not sure why I held back on this one...but I did, and finally let it go...fully expecting it to not resonate...I suppose really I am most full of regret that I did not get these out in the eighties. Thank you Curtis, I am most pleased to find my words from my youth to be relevant in this new age.



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