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Old 07-02-2008, 04:23 PM
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My mind shows me and the embrace of good,
overcoming mistakes,

I just got a taste of evil
and shook it off
like a snake sheds its skin,

I make the equation
for the world I want to live in,

I envoke clean air like greenhouse emissions,
speaking clearly my position and believe
in what I've written.



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Old 07-04-2008, 11:31 PM
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i love the line...
well i just tried to find one line and decided i like it all. it has a nice flow to it and an interesting use of metaphors. nice job



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thanks Thea,

its great to hear that,


it means the ideas correlated as well



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Hi, Eric!
Intricate thing... I like this!
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Dear Erik,

This is really good. The metaphors are outstanding, and I love the thoughts running through my mind reading this.

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hey Sergey thanks


thanks Kim

just proving I still have it I guess



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Succinct and respectable. Nicely, plainly stated, neither preachy nor lofty. Well done. (Little concerned about teh presentation, though. Any way to tighten it together some?)

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thank you Jeff, I'd like to tighten it up,
if I knew further what you meant I would,
my guess is you mean to make it all without the spaces?



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Sure. Let me show yo