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Old 04-17-2008, 01:45 AM
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My muse(for Flook)
You
are a
vision

My muse
a painter's
dream

Your eyes
if they should fall
on me

Would
see
my heart and soul

And know
how they beat
and soar for you

How I
cherish
the poem you are

Your skin
like silk

Your eyes
tranquil
pools

You inspire
a desire in me
to pen these words for you.

This one is for you Flook, as promised.
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Old 04-17-2008, 04:04 PM
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Your skin
like silk

Your eyes
tranquil
pools

Very nice...I love this really simple, straightforward admission of emotional love.

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I admire how you are able to dash out poems so fast! It's something I've never been able to do. I can only write poetry (most of the time) when the muse for it hits which isn't very often. My muse is mostly in prose which I do relatively well.

You are so prolific in verse, it tires me, like watching children dash here and there and wonder where all that energy comes from.

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I thought this was the best of the whole.

Great work, Eric
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So sorry I haven't been on here in a while, so I haven't been able to comment :/

But as I've said before, this is absolutely amazing Eric.. I'm so flattered.
It's one of the nicest things anyone's ever done for me

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I just read this again...this time a different part stands out.

How I
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A work of art!

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