PaintedDiary

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For those who asked to see and were were interested in viewing "My Piano I"...it is posted below.

My Piano I

When I rest my eager hands against the keyboard
my fingers transform with each ivory key
I succumb to the song of your sea
embrace every wave
move deeply
with your extraordinary energy
your power

With each black key
I enchant you
resonate with you
make magic with you
my melodious silhouette
echoes with you

Pedals satisfy
a lingering desire
to touch you
play you
no one knew

about me
and my Piano.

Jeez

Yeah.... That "" F "
note can sure get to
ya.

If you don't watch out
for it. LOL.

This is great.....

Thanks for the read.

PaintedDiary

Dear Jeez,

Yes, pleassssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeee watch out for that "F" note!!! Thank you for taking time to read and comment Jeez. I love to read your comments, they are works of art themselves, so unique!!! Thanks my friend.....I may go ahead and schedule a little "F" note time. lololololol Love Ya'!!

{{{KIM}}}

erikestabrook

I found hard and creamy insuffecient metaphors other thahn that its good just find two better words and it'll be on point

PaintedDiary

Point taken, thanks

nomadicrhymer

Wow, PD…Piano II is a delight to the palate of the mind!! “hard and creamy” puts me in mind of opulence – grand balls and dancing ‘till morning, while absorbing the resonance of the “F” notes into your very core – hmmm I think my imagination is working overtime right now. Great job!

Piano 1 – I can’t pick out my favorite stanza here!
I succumb to the song of your sea
embrace every wave
move deeply

I won’t even say where that took me – hehe – you have a gift and you tenderly, lovingly, nourish your craft as it grows in tremendous waves…but these are magical waves, they flow on and on, never ebbing. I have to say that I enjoy exceedingly every singly thing that you write, Kim!

When I read your magic, this is what you give (to me and many others I’m sure) and you have penned it well:
I enchant you
resonate with you
make magic with you
my melodious silhouette
echoes with you


Loved every bit of it!

Nomad

PaintedDiary

Thank you so much Ms Therese for your kind words. I am so thankful you took the time to read and comment, as I am honored!!! What I love is that you "Got it", you got what the metaphor was about--->opulence!!!! Yes, that is the effect I was going after in a different way. Thank you again so much.

Kimberly