MiscellaneousHave a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...) Part of my "My Piano" Series, Poem III of V, and toned.
My Piano Love III (Cinquain)
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My Piano Love III (Cinquain)
My Piano Love III Cinquain
Spirit
in my fingers
right hand danced melody
left; danced gospel chords so sweet on
Sunday
For those who asked to see and were interested in viewing "My Piano I"and "My Piano II"...it is posted below.
My Piano Love II (Cinquain)
It is
hard and creamy
tickles my ear drum so
hearing the ivory of the
"F" note
My Piano Love I
When I rest my eager hands against the keyboard
my fingers transform with each ivory key
I succumb to the song of your sea
embrace every wave
move deeply
with your extraordinary energy
your power
With each black key
I enchant you
resonate with you
make magic with you
my melodious silhouette
echoes with you
Pedals satisfy
a lingering desire
to touch you
play you
no one knew
about me
and my Piano.
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My Dearest Jeez,
Thank you so much Jeez for taking precious time to read and respond. I love to read your comments Jeez, as they always make me smile, and feel good. This one made me smile, feel good, and shed a few tears. I am so thankful and honored that you enjoy the writes. Love Ya'!
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With each black key
I enchant you
resonate with you
make magic with you
my melodious silhouette
echoes with you
Interesting series MS PAINTED --- I'm reading some very nice poetry this evening and this trio is right up there with the best!
Reading between the lines **cough, cough, cough** My Piano #1 is simply a magnificent display of unity!
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Dear Ms Jacquii,
Thank you for taking precious time to read and comment on my piano series. I am humbled by your comment. I plan to write 2 more to complete this series, and also accompany with artwork. Thank you so much.
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--- I'm reading some very nice poetry this evening and this trio is right up there with the best!
