deep_poet86

In another time we held each other
like there was no end
Just me and you together in
a place that doesn't exist
to their peeping eyes

We are closed in around
a field of love
and it continues growing
even after we are gone from
its surrounding

I remember our last day together
It was the first time we kissed
and felt so free
All I wanted was to hold your
hand and feel the joy of love

But then she seen us and grabbed you
from me
That was the last day I seen you
I laid there for hours hugging myself
wishing you were here

You kept whispering that someday we
would be able to walk around the world
Love each other without jealousy and all the
bad things that come with love and regret

Even though I can't see you now
I know we will always have feelings
strong forever
And when we finally see each other again
I know our love will grow
again and again

By: Lee-Ann Wolsey
11/24/2007
8:28pm

Dedicated To: Patrick

Smiley24_7

This reminded me of a friend who I loved, and the last time we saw each other.. we had a kiss.
He wasn't snatched away but left willingly to another place in hopes of bettering himself.

I hope you find the remedy to the ache of love...
Many have tried.
Most have failed.

Ariono-jovan Labu

although somber by the mood this cast, i did sense a bit of optimism by the conclusion this canvas artist. i know many can relate to heartbreak & this wasn't portrayed as if a Hallmark cliche`. some passage (stanzas) i enjoyed.

"I remember our last day together
It was the first time we kissed
and felt so free
All I wanted was to hold your
hand and feel the joy of love...

keep the ink spilling by the puddles atist. one-

deep_poet86

Thank you both, I am glad you enjoyed it