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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)

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Old 12-08-2006, 04:21 AM
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I watch you sitting there,
on the ledge looking outside.
I wonder if you think it's fair,
that you have to be inside.
Do you wish you could be out to feel the breeze?
so you can chase birds all day.
You wouldn't want to freeze,
when the sun goes down.
I wonder what it's like to be you,
to take naps and play all day.
You are there when i am blue,
you make me feel better.
You are cool for being a cat,
you are my bestfriend
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Old 12-08-2006, 10:14 PM
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this is a darling piece; I can picture all you depict...well done! Animal lovers rock!
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Old 12-09-2006, 01:33 AM
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I like this one, Jess...both introspective and straightforward...kinda cute too! Welcome!!



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Thank you very much. This is all about my cat.
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Thank you. I am glad that u liked it.
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Old 07-27-2008, 11:18 PM
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I watch you sitting there,
on the ledge looking outside.
I wonder if you think it's fair,
that you have to be inside.
Do you wish you could be out to feel the breeze?
so you can chase birds all day.
You wouldn't want to freeze,
when the sun goes down.
I wonder what it's like to be you,
to take naps and play all day.
You are there when I am blue,
you make me feel better.
You are cool for being a cat,
you are my best friend
Jessie, this is a great poem about my grandkitty. You didn't, however, mention you have to hide the toilet paper and paper towels from him, or that he loves to knock things off tables and knock things over, even when they're on the floor.

He's a character for sure, lol. You also didn't mention how he knocked out the screen in your 3rd floor window and that you found him hanging by his claws for dear life, lol.

Love the poem but love the story behind this cwazy cat, lol.

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thank you. He is crazy thats for sure. love ya too
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Being a man of many cats myself, I understand this tribute on a very personal level. As important as human family, these feline friends become a part of us we simply cannot deny, and to which we find it hard to say no. Simply and well stated, Pumpkin.

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Thank you. They definitly are a part of us that we can't live without.
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