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Miscellaneous Have a poetic style of your own? Have poems that defies all conventional categories? Share them here please. (i.e. dark & bitter, political, revolutionary, abstract, etcetera...)
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Old 06-20-2008, 05:15 AM
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Recollections.
Dedicated to Larisa,
that never loved me.


Recollections.

My recollections playing tricks on me.
The lead me into time
When I could hear words:
I love you, do you love me too?
But all have gone.
And only recollections
Are playing their endless tricks on me.
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In very few words you've captured that dreaded moment most everyone must live. Beautiful and sad. A couple suggestions: the 2nd line They lead me into that time
line5 But all has gone
last line Play(omit Are)their endless tricks on me.

All the best to you,Lisa
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