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Old 07-05-2008, 08:06 AM
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s.p. "Dry leaves..."
Dry leaves are rustling under my feet...
Maybe Eternity hears the same.
When leads its endless way
And stepping, bare feet, on my elapsed day.
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Why ever not? Thanks for understanding. Sergey.
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Dear SergoB,

I absolutely love this. I can hear the poem. Excellent word choice that does lends itself to many images and thoughts. Beautiful. Excellent rating, going into my favorites, and beautifully executed.

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Dear Kim!
Thank you so much for your kind words!
Kim, s.p. - means "short poem", only.
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